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John_Galt 10:25 pm UTC 08/22/07 |
| In reply to: | 'All these damn memories...........' - Scaramouche 10:11 am UTC 08/22/07 |
| Scaramouche, I've transferred the song to my PMP. Great work! I liked your vocals. There's only one part I'd change right now: the emphasis on the ly in endlessly. The word matches the long note conceptually, of course, but the long note just seems to fall on the wrong syllable. Funny thing is, that its these things that bother me on the first listen, that end up being the most enjoyable parts on multiple listens... Thanks for sharing. -=John Galt=- > Partly inspired by the line ‘well there’s only one girl > that I will ever love, and that was so many years ago’, > I’ve written & recorded (quick demo) some new lyrics to > one of my favourite Steinman melodies..........but which > one?? > > mp3 answer at the link (thanks to Dave Akerman for > hosting). > > Feel free to comment, but be brutally honest...I can take > it!! > > REGRETS > > In the still of the night, you will hear my heart crying > For a love, that’s long gone > After so many years, she is always in my dreams > I can’t erase, can’t forget > > Take me back, to the start > To a time when ev’rything was so brand new, and golden > How I hate, here & now > For my body has grown old, and tired and broken > > All these damn memories, are so cruel and relentless > They’ll just haunt, forever > How they twist & they turn, how they tease & then deny > They’ll always burn, endlessly > > Take me back, to the start > Let me banish all this heartache, wipe away, all these > tears > God I hate, here & now > So much emptiness torments me, there’s no hope, only > fears > > Am I cursed, for all time, am I cursed to live alone > Until the day, that I die > For I’ll never forget, and as long as I remember > I can never move on > > Take me back, to the start > Far away & long ago is all I yearn, for today > God I hate, here & now > There is nothing but a future, yet I crave, yesterday > > There’s nothing left here..... > My heart is empty..... > So many regrets..... > > | |
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