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Marklbetya 11:49 pm UTC 10/31/07 |
| First, the Email from Markell as to why I have to post this for her: "I put in what I guessed could have been my password but no luck. So I said "forgot password" and they said "what's your address" and I told them and they said "no such address." So, again, I'm nonexistent. So I re-registerd and was told they'd send me my verification code but they didn't. what's the big fucking deal with the Steinman board? It's not the Pentagon, for crying out loud." And her comments: Dear Jim: 1) Thanks for giving us a chance to see your lyrics in advance and for inviting us to respond! I hope you don't regret it. 2) I don't know the context or depth of a potential pun with "...will Decorate the city" (perhaps you want to award it a medal), but I think the phrase would flow more beautifully if you use "...redecorate the city." Did you consider that, or is it too different? Markell | |
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