I realised in Hospital when I was ill, when you nearly die it totally changes your outlook on life. Me and Jim are probably really lucky to be here.
So, I thought if I need people's opinion's on my songs I'm going to have to ask and expect critismn.
couldn't find the right button lol to edit my therad Oh! Well. I am sorry. Thought I would be brave and post a new song I wrote and see what everyone thinks of it. People who I know have compared it to a Steinman like lyric so thats a huge compliment what do you think of it?
I hope you all like it more than anything us writers need ears and I do hate to ask people!
Hope you all had a good Christmas and New Year a bit belated I know.
I really hope you don't mind me posting twice I am really crap with forums, SORRY... I hope you don't mind me posting up a song, for me it's sort of tradition!
Being creative is great...
Please, message me back...
Thank you,
Grace xx
PS Thank you.
Don’t Let It Break Your Heart
Lyrics by Grace Shackleton
All of the prophecies
The cold war on your tongue
Bullets rip the sky open
Beware of anything graceful
Any end to any of this at all?
One by one they fall
Shining like black dogs in the night
Over the Valleys
Over bridges
Over roads
Make anything but war
Walk on the streets of salvation
How do I get through?
Get through to you?
(Chorus :)
Don’t let it break your heart
Sing a song
It’s only begun
Don’t let it break your heart
Torn apart
Clinging to lost memories
Like ghosts
We don’t need no tears
Because we all know how to breakdown
It’s all down to salvation
There’s some kind of Heaven
Around
Even when you can’t stand your ground
Or in that half light you’ve found
(Chorus :)
Don’t let it break your heart
Sing a song
It’s only begun
Don’t let it break your heart
Torn apart
Clinging to lost memories
Like ghosts
There’s some kind of Heaven
Around
Even when you can’t stand your ground
Or in that half light you’ve found
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