I've been on the verge of saying this many times before, but this seems the appropriate moment: next time, use less words to say more.
For the love of all that's bright and shiny, not everything you write is a novel or a screenplay or a libretto or whatever the fuck it is that you're working on.
Short and to the point, while certainly not my forte, can do wonders. Try it ;)
> I'm a lyricist and I'm a writer and yet I can't defend
> myself in a way that's even legible enough to follow
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