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re: NJC: Next Best Thing

Posted by:
Rupert 01:06 am UTC 02/10/11
In reply to: NJC: Next Best Thing - Vin 01:31 am UTC 02/07/11

If you are trying to do Steinman try and do a little OTT a bit more often and not so factual otherwise it is Bad Company not Steinman.

Example - Sure the shadows are thick and the light in here’s tricky, should be something like
You embrace the shadows of my darkest thoughts
I sense a need growing from your silent presence
ellinminate the night and discover my passion...

Should be something like -
Instead of Bouncer's calling closing time say call him the Matchfaker's calling closing time

You, you’re not as young as you used to be,
Should be something like - you're not as pure as virgin snow
Instead of - And I refuse to be as old as I feel.
but this old stallion needs a refreshing gallop
on glissening grounds that cascades and unfolds


> Some lyrics I'd like to share. Not intentional, but I
> sort of feel like this is a prequel to a song I posted
> awhile back, "You Pay for What You Get." For a reason I
> can't yet figure out, I write most of my lyrics for female
> characters, and they tend to be a little fucked in the
> head.
>
> "Next Best Thing"
>
> This place is packed tonight
> With damned and damaged souls
> So many phony brave faces
> Hoping hard that nobody will notice
> Just how bad
>
> But you let your heart show
> It’s dripping down your sleeve
> You’ve got that look about you
> Like you don’t know what to believe
> Anymore
>
> So offer me your ear
> Maybe later we can get the hell out of here
> But for now sit back and let me do the talking
>
> Oh boy, stop wishing on broken stars,
> Quit dreaming recycled dreams.
> If the Gods ever cared they’d have answered your prayers,
> You wouldn’t be here in the back of this bar,
> Crying cold tears on colder shoulders
> And conjuring your desperate schemes.
>
> Let me be your next best thing tonight
> And I’ll let you be mine.
> It’s past last call, the house has turned up the lights,
> The bouncer’s calling closing time.
> You, you’re not as young as you used to be,
> And I refuse to be as old as I feel.
> So I’ll settle for you if you’ll settle for me –
> Nod twice for “yes,” pick up the check –
> Give me a kiss and we’ll seal this deal.
>
> No you can’t put make-up on a shattered heart,
> Sun glasses won’t hide an anguished mind,
> You can tease your hair up like an ecstasy high,
> And pull your hat low as the brim will go,
> Sure the shadows are thick and the light in here’s
> tricky,
> But sooner or later – you better pray that it’s later-
> Sooner or later, boy,
> Even the small cracks will show.
>
>
> This place is Hell tonight,
> So many devils are on the prowl.
> We’ve got our best angel masks on,
> But I can see you like mine anyhow,
> Like it bad.
>
> You went and let your heart show!
> Its pouring down your sleeve,
> I swear I’m looking right through you,
> And I’ll never let nobody deceive you
> Anymore
>
> So offer me your hand
> We can have ourselves a little one night stand
> You never know how different things may look in the
> morning
>
> So boy, stop waiting for the ride to begin,
> Quit watching from your seat in the stands.
> There’s no way you can win without some skin in the game,
> No way to knock a little something straight out of the
> park
> You can wash away your fears in these watered down beers
> Or you can get a little life on your hands.
>
> Let me be your next best thing tonight
> And I’ll let you be mine.
> It’s past last call, the house has turned up the lights,
> The bouncer’s calling closing time.
> You, you’re not as young as you used to be,
> And I refuse to be as old as I feel.
> So I’ll settle for you if you’ll settle for me –
> Nod twice for “yes,” pick up the check –
> Give me a kiss and we’ll seal this deal.
>
>


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