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Vin 05:09 pm UTC 03/20/15 |
| In reply to: | re: Finally tracked down the Sun In Your Eyes lyrics - JB 10:54 am UTC 03/20/15 |
| Agreed. Doesn't scream "Steinman," lyrically, other than a sprinkling of lines. Not that there's anything wrong with that... > > I think the verses could do with a re-write? > > It's amazing to think that five years after writing this: > > Walkin' down by the riverside > I can hear those wild dogs barking > And I know that it's cold outside > And I just can't keep from walkin' > > You've got to come to me now > Let your hair hang heavy and low > You've got to come to me now > 'Cause you don't have anywhere left to go > > Walkin' down by the riverside > I can hear those vultures calling > And I know that it's cold outside > And I just can't keep from falling > > You've got to come to me now > Let the night hang heavy and low > You've got to come to me now > 'Cause you don't have anywhere left to go > > the same person wrote For Crying Out Loud. Unless they > already knew, there's no way anyone would associate these > lyrics with Jim. | |
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