I'd add a slight dig to end the stanza:
'And if you won't do it,
There's Steinman at the door...'
> To lighten the mood slightly:
>
> Was so looking forward a few years ago to Phil Spector
> 'returning' to work with Starsailor, that it was a shame
> he only produced two songs (even though 'Silence Is Easy'
> is great).
>
> Had the title '(Just One More) Little Symphony For The
> Kids' back then, as a kind of wish that he would do more
> work.
>
> After reading the new book, I thought I'd try & start
> writing the song (mid-tempo rock/pop ballad), and here's
> the sample chorus:
>
> Just one more...little symphony for the kids
> Just one more...amazing wall of sound
> We've waited such a long long time
> And we just can't wait, anymore
> Just one more little symphony for us kids
> An make us feel like, the way we did before...
>
>
> Too cheesy??
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