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Scaramouche 10:58 pm UTC 10/11/10 |
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NJC : Save the Lap Dance for Me - Vin 12:57 am UTC 10/10/10 |
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> Who is this person I’ve become?
> How did I wind up here?
> Light years beyond my glory days,
> a fraction of the man I thought I’d be,
Love these lines.
> And all the signs say “Quit while you’re behind”
And these.
> I’ll only look you in the eye, when you’re looking away.
And these.
> I’ve seen a gremlin on the wing
Twilight Zone reference?
Perhaps too many lyrics, which all don't work (for me) and I would look at streamlining, but lots of potential as a slow brooding country ballad?
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