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Vin 01:25 pm UTC 10/12/10 |
| In reply to: | re: NJC : Save the Lap Dance for Me - Scaramouche 10:58 pm UTC 10/11/10 |
| Thanks for the feedback. Yes, a TZ reference. I was pleased with that :) I tend to write more lyrics rather than less, but I usually like songs with lots of lyrics, anyway. (Bat, IDAFL, Objects all come to mind.) If a song is telling a story, rather than just being a "party" song or whatever, I belong to the "more is more" school of thought. Plus, since I don't write music, its probably my subconscious way of overcompensating for that glaring hole in my "songs." > > Who is this person I’ve become? > > How did I wind up here? > > Light years beyond my glory days, > > a fraction of the man I thought I’d be, > > Love these lines. > > > > And all the signs say “Quit while you’re behind” > > And these. > > > > I’ll only look you in the eye, when you’re looking away. > > And these. > > > > I’ve seen a gremlin on the wing > > Twilight Zone reference? > > > Perhaps too many lyrics, which all don't work (for me) and > I would look at streamlining, but lots of potential as a > slow brooding country ballad? > > | |
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