| Little script for class, Opinions? | |
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RSG 04:54 pm UTC 01/31/08 |
| FADE IN: 1 FULL SHOT – Classroom Desk Rows (College) ANTHONY (mumbles aloud) (sitting sideways) She holds an attentive posture. She is a captive charm; tranquil & cool. She smiles every so often, sitting across three rows into her desk softly upon her plastic seat. Little lady, name unknown; Active to socialize, does she realize these blue eyes whom fantasize her majestic prize for her own? NARRATOR has a gentle voice and young as a voice like a young woman. NARRATOR As Anthony talks, the few whom are around him, and watch their mental student with cautious ease. The mature female instructor walks around handing out blue papers across the front rows to hand back. Most kids talk amongst their neighbors, others dazed maybe two students who attention is raised. ANTHONY (Continues to mumble over unknown girl) them eyes, her thighs, with an open hand I would slide - INSTRUCTOR (immediately interrupts) Anthony, would you pass back the papers on your desk to the others? ANTHONY (amazed) Hmm… Oh… Right! NARRATOR The entire classroom laughs; now turned around and eyes on Anthony. Girl turns around and with a small smile she notices with purple eyelids with a glow of interest and charm. INSTRUCTOR (Staying patient) Anthony, would you pass back the paper on your desk so the others can have their sheet! 2 CU - Red School Bell It rings. Students file languidly for the door. Anthony leans back in his chair, in no real hurry for next class. The girl passes by and sounds like the narrator exactly. GIRL (smiles) Hi. ANTHONY (Jumps in seat) (Says nothing) (Looks upward into her eyes w/ a slight panic) GIRL (walks out door) FADE OUT: FADE IN: 1 FULL SHOT – Back home. Dawn. Kitchen Table – Full View NARRATOR Anthony is sitting at his mother’s dining room table with some paper and a blue pen. Her dining room is commercial clean, and there is a bottle of soda underneath a coaster. Anthony’s head slides down from one palm, he sighs and his hair licks upward. FADE OUT: 1 FULL SHOT – Classroom Desk Rows (Same room) NARRATOR Back into the classroom; the curtains are drawn and AMBIENT lights are turned off. A black and white movie is struggling to be played in an “ancient” VCR machine and 1970’s television screen. She and Anthony are sitting row beside row. GIRL (Quietly) Hi. ANTHONY (Looks toward her, annoyed-like) (Scratches some words onto little paper) (Tossing toward her) The teacher picks up the paper off of the ground. INSTRUCTOR Anthony! You know very well you are not allowed to be passing notes, even if the class is watching a movie. Idiot! NARRATOR The instructor wouldn’t normally say something like idiot, but that day was a very important day to stay tuned into attention. Although for the young man and woman; they couldn’t care so less. Dolly Out: As the teacher walks between the two rows back to the front of the classroom. Reading the note which reads, HELLO NARRATOR Anthony still scratching ink onto another little paper. He tosses the little note, and the girl picks up the piece of paper. Anthony smiles, She smiles. Girl unfolds the paper once revealing in beautiful writing; the paper flashing light and dark from the television. It reads GILD’D BLISS SIN COOL’D MIST WITH THE TOUCH OF HER VOICE LEAVES ME FEELING NO CHOICE BUT TO HOLLER IN A QUIET RIOT GIRL (aloud) Hi. My name is Sarah. ANTHONY (Tosses pen ahead) Both kids were warm and delighted. They pull their chairs in close and together watch the remainder of the movie. He reaches out for her hand. She accepts with her hand like a warm glove. | |
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