| re: Frying Pan verse | |
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Vin 02:47 pm UTC 03/09/08 |
| In reply to: | re: Frying Pan verse - Belmont 03:38 am UTC 03/07/08 |
| OK, here's my stab. Harder than I thought - not the easiest rhythm (tune? melody? what's the right word here?) to match. You're lonely and your desperate for a life that's more than what's on t.v. and you're tired of being lied to by those phony tough boys prowling the streets You're always looking up but everybody drags you down and nothin's all they say you can do but all their rules like every hero you've had will soon be fallen to ruin laid in waste at your feet Turn on! Turn on! Turn it up, turn it loose If you just give me a chance then I can give you the juice Come on! Come on! Its time to burn up the fuse You got nothin' to do and even less to lose! So wander past the crumbling churches follow my voice as I whisper your name forget all those Sunday school lessons now sometimes the things that you want and you need are the same I'll swallow my pride if you'll swallow it too and savor every drop of desire And I wanna take you... > Not bad at all!! I can tell that you used the rythm of the > actual song instead of just writing lyrics that doesn't > flow at all. I could imagine that. > > > > > I think Vin asked for a Frying Pan verse. This may not fit > > with the rest of the song, but I like it: > > > > It’s only 2 o’clock > > But my temperature’s beginning to soar > > An ev’ry single muscle > > Is burning with a fever, you’re the only cure > > > > I’ve never been this hot > > An I’ve never been so wired > > An ravenous is all that I feel > > > > Ooh your bodies ev’ry fantasy > > An I’m begging baby, hurry up and give me a taste > > Ooh your bodies ev’ry fantasy > > An I’m dying baby, hurry up and give me a taste! > > > > Come On! Come On! > > An take a roll of the dice > > You’ve been yearning forever, don’t you ever think twice! > > > > Come On! Come On! > > It’s time to follow your dreams > > Take ‘em over the top, way beyond the extremes > > Take ‘em over the top, there’s no such thing as extremes! > > > > > > So banish all your inhibitions > > Break all your chains, you know they’re starting to rust > > Follow the sound of my heartbeat now > > It’s racing faster than ever, in a rhythm of lust > > > > Just open your heart and whisper all of your needs > > I’ll answer ev’ry single desire > > > > I’m gonna take you... > > > > > > | |
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